Buggered if I Know.
By Dan Ryder
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Your arm bent awkwardly, frozen,
like a stick edging over the bank,
knuckles grazing the water, rupturing
the surface and summoning tiny concentric
circles.
In the wake we surf a new course
with salmon platting an undercurrent
that weaves tightly this fluid discord.
Ushered up sediment spinning in tiny vortices
before being jettisoned in all directions and
sinking back together, there to await
the next high adventure.
We, the sum of motion become aspects,
we ridicule the stillness and watch the others,
their substance melting into a muck despair
which the soils consume and caress back to health,
fertilizer from which opportunity grows though
doomed to failure as hindsight knows.
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Beautifully composed. I felt
Beautifully composed. I felt like an observer of nature reading this; it's ever-changing birth and death.
Some vivid imagery created especially through the first stanza.
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Yes I found it moving!
Yes I found it moving!
Just one little thing, can I ask why no capital to start the poem? Maybe it's intentional I'm just being inquisitive :)
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You have a lovely montage of
You have a lovely montage of imagery here. Enjoyed each individual one.
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