Primary Colors
By imaniisfaith
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Paint your target on my back and
Take your shot.
Tighten the noose, tighten the noose
Until even my children's children can't breathe.
Blue veins black guns
Even blacker corpses,
Rotting in the blackest streets
Familiarizing the black noses of black boys
With the smell of death.
Rust red bricks through unforgiving windshields
Like a thank you for the fear
For the misery
For the hatred
That pools inside hearts
Turning men into inkwells
And Baltimore into a Pollock piece.
Fifty cent skittles in worthless hands
He just wanted to see the rainbow
Brown boy, black hoodie,
Blood red, white and blue on the pavement
Fifty cent skittles in worthless hands
He just wanted to taste the rainbow
On the back of the tongue
Where the bitterest tastebuds reside.
You've always been the one who read the maps
Gave the directions.
Back of the bus
Bottom rung of the ladder
Pull to the side
Hands up (don't shoot!)
So marionette man make us dance for you,
Pull the strings
And when you're finished pull the trigger.
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Comments
the imagery is very well done
the imagery is very well done in this
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It's so great to read a piece
It's so great to read a piece that's so on fire. I thought the second stanza was particularly good, such striking imagery. The only reservation I have is the last stanza. For me it had a bit of the feel of a conventional 'rounding off' for the piece, lacking spark in contrast to the blazing fury of what came before. But of course it does bring it back round to your opening.
I really did enjoy this very much.
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The colours in the third last
The colours in the third last stanza are excellent and very well placed. I really enjoyed the read - thank you!
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Extremely good - very
Extremely good - very powerful and pointed. Made me feel angry because I think about these things a lot.
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