Another poem for my boyfreind

By kramz

Thu, 25 Jun 2015
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You are my sun,
You are my stars,
You are the reason for the smile on my face,
You keep me safe, you keep me warm,
With you by my side the sky is the limit. 

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Submitted by kramz on

please give honest feeback as I want to know if I should give it to him or not.

Submitted by Bee on

I would - especially if he is a romantic type, or likes poetry...

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

Go on! Go for it.

 

Submitted by kramz on

Thankyou guys! I think i will give it to him :)

Submitted by Bee on

Could you let us know the result - in another poem, maybe. 

Best wishes,

x

Bee

Submitted by kramz on

I sure can, thankyou so much for your intrest! :)