The ebbing tide
By alphadog1
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An ebbing tide, is now arising; the hollow bell, echoes its final chime;
In the eve’n’g sky it slowly rises, to then softly, fade, far off to die.
And the wind, blows cold at midnight, as the footsteps, they do recede;
The whispered one, is gone forever : There’s nothing left, here to receive.
And low, the voices, here do murmur; with cold hard murder, on their minds;
As the final rope is ever tightened, so now I slip, to my demise.
Don't cry for me, my dearest lover; don't even waste, a single tear;
For I am now, upon a journey: and it's far, away from here.
No I don't know , where I'm going; I only know, where I've come from,
And this walk is always endless, along a path, forever long.
© adh 2015
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Nice imagery, chilling mood!
Nice imagery, chilling mood!
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I was at first put off by the
I was at first put off by the amount of punctuation but after a few reads I now realise it adds to the ebb and flow very nicely. A very enjoyable rhythm.
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