Managras

Cherry

By Deliberately Evolving

Fri, 21 Aug 2015
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11 comments
 

Managras

 
M'i lingkat dan uyo eems ot eb
ginteslin os tentin ot em
 
Tub I kinth hatt lal oyu aher
si eatusolb shibergib ym ader
 
I yam sa lewl eb Kiel a metu
Uyo wonk hatt I ma tique etastu.
 
t'ond dentrep dan ond kile hatt,
I wonk oyu kinth M'i lingkat prac
 
I yam sa lewl klat managras
orf lal hatt oyu nac derntundas
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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Clever lady, you've had fun, and given us a spot of fun – we are on 'sort-of' holiday, and I got my husband on part of this, but I think I got there first in the end. But we are both a little stumped by the last line. Is is 'ord', or should it be 'orf'?  and is there an 'ouy' missing, say  after 'hatt'? You even got rhyming in!! warm regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, now I find you've just changed it to 'orf'!! what about the 'ouy'? Rh

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Rhiannon - I missed that. It was a bit harder to check that poem for errors. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

That was fun!

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Experi - Mental! Took me ages to wrap my head around it but I am slow! Really enjoyable.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

So glad you enjoyed it PS and LC. 

 

It was Rhiannons fruit puzzle poem that inspired me.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Bee on

I got most of it but it was late and puzzling was a bit too much for my tiny brain. Done it today - mostly. It's great - good fun. Very clever. Enjoyed!

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Glad you enjoyed it.

 

 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks admin for the cherries. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

I loved your managras they are volley and nunfy, AE.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Lol. Thanks Luigi - glad you enjoyed 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.