Age

By braintrain

Wed, 14 Oct 2015

3 comments

Cold,cold so very cold time forever flows

warmth dwells deep within the spirit of life

beauty is fleeting as a falling snowflake, yet a soothing balm

to the ravages of the years,mirrored in the psyche

Permalink Submitted by cassiegoeswild on Wed, 2015-10-14 10:50

this is clever. I like how short it is but it says quite a lot at the same time.

Cass

Permalink Submitted by braintrain on Wed, 2015-10-14 19:25

Thanks....I've got a major writers block right now and am not sure what I'm even trying to say when I start out writing ...but thanks

Permalink Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on Wed, 2015-10-14 23:59

Cold time flows but warmth in life - what a very insightful and artistic description. This is a very well described poem.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.