Sparrow
By Bee
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SPARROW
on the point of fledging -
eager for the air,
fanned new flossy feathers
and wavered on the edge.
My fear filled warnings
all ignored, she fell
into your trap. My precious
chick, you snapped
the day she leapt;
almost broke her
tender neck - wings
as yet unspread
you fused against her sides
while twiggen legs
you careless prized. I see her
frozen and compliant in fear -
beak agape, tongue
flicking at the tasteless air
while you indulged
your greedy appetite
until you sent her flying
home to roost uncomforted
against my wing
no longer mine, and nor
would anybody else's
touch ever be acceptable
again. Broken chicks -
impossible to mend them.
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Seems to eerily move into
Seems to eerily move into metaphor of dismay and grief. Experiences can't be undone, though God's touch can bring a measure of healing, and learning from bad and foolish experiences. Rhiannon
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Love the closing line after
Love the closing line after that delicately worded story of struggle and vulnerability.
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This is a very evocative and
This is a very evocative and clever piece of writing and describes the situation extremely well. If only it would touch the heart of the person it should the most and yet only the kind hearted will be the ones saddened.
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A poingnant, but well written poem Bee, life holds so many dangers.
Congrats on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
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