The Grief of Gaziantep.
By Ladylily
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The Grief of Gaziantep.
Hotter than a Dragon’s kiss,
the seas boil under saffron sun.
Tiny thrumming mosquitoes zone on sweating, caramac skin,
Customer entertainment...hanging from shop fronts,
nine carat gold cages lure buyers in,
imprisoned, flush-red faced finches,
wings of pumpkin-orange
hypnotize purring feral cats.
The afternoon air laden with aromas,
Cinnamon, cumin, ginger...
Bluest sky tips to ripe pomegranate.
Anatolian mountain weavers peddle hand-spun carpets,
fine silk, cool cotton, warm wool.
Faded proud portrait of mounted Ataturk accepts toasts
from chinking, inky Turkish and golden-apple tea glasses.
Layered lutes echo the Ciftetelli as lovers entwine... ***
An odd guest delivers a soul-scalding gift.
Shrapnel splinters shatter the buzzing streets of Gaziantep.
Poppy-red plasma sprays through ghost-grey gusts...
Whimpering, wailing, screaming, sobbing,
echoes of sadness rupture the sodden earth,
in once jovial corners, now cups of embers smoulder.
Still Mama’s jet hair moves...like Puma’s in slow-motion.
Leapt into an everlasting world of sorrow,
grief beat-beats upon severed hearts.
Ceaseless pain flutters on wings of wind,
as stretchers convey the motionless and the maimed.
A Jasmine flower chain now a poisonous asp.
The apricot horizon flits through boundless violet skies
as the barley half-moon weeps with newborn stars.
Bleeding wounds will scab,
hope, the key of freedom, falters.
Swallows weave darkness to night.
Longings for the lost...
as loved ones whisper in their sleep.
*** Ciftetelli..Turkish Folk music often played at Weddings.
Dedicated to the Citizens of Gaziantep Turkey... Where 54 people (including 22 children) were killed and many injured by a suicide bomber on Saturday 20th August 2016. One mother lost four of her five children.
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Wonderfully evocative writing
Wonderfully evocative writing. A most effective shift from vibrancy and colour to a drifting sense of sadness.
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Hits all five senses at once
Hits all five senses at once - this is a real prize of a poem, and our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
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Absolutely brilliant.
Incredible writing. This poem takes the reader on a real journey, evoking images, scents, sounds, and an orgy of colors. It's a literary tapestry worthy of publication. I'm not going to offer a single criticism, because none are due, except more please!
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I was truly moved. By the
I was truly moved. By the poem, by the tribute and the sincerity of the writing. I only wish I could write so beautifully. Well done.
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This is so moving with its
This is so moving with its collision of colour against horror.
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Smack! A thing that reminds
Smack! A thing that reminds me of the best poet on this site and anywhere else John shade. Every word a winner causing painless smile from sunshine cracked lips. Want it to end with half moon weeps newborn stars. Whatever age you are keep doing this
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Wonderfully written
So difficult to get the emotional balance and imagery right on a heart-rending subject but you achieved this beautifully. A great tribute to the city of Gaziantep.
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beautiful
What a beautiful(and profound) poem Lily. Thanks for composing
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