Not an object (tw:gore)
By Aspiringwtr
Thu, 07 Feb 2019
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people are not objects to be broken
or repaired
or renewed
people are meat to be sliced
and consumed
and expunged
a broken neck to stop the pain
a cut to let the blood
a hack to cut off the fat
pieces spread out on a platter
picked clean to the bone
temporarily satisfying
never enough
scraped out of a mouth
casually tossed away
crushed unrecognizably
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perhaps this could go in the
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
perhaps this could go in the horror category as well as drama?
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Your imagery is very strong
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
Your imagery is very strong in this piece. Some lines seem a little clunky though, perhaps overlong. Still very enjoyable, skilled writing.
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