Sea Monsters
By onemorething
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Written to submit to a Twitter challenge to write about sea monsters. Became a bit metaphorical.
Sometimes we look for monsters
in the wrong places or
perhaps the problem is
that we are searching for them at all;
earth rent, we want to peer into scars,
we wonder what new abyss to descend,
and here are ghosts and fangs enough,
so many vents of fury
sulphuring the blackness.
Yet we journey on by fathoms,
compressed, water weighted -
we see dark stars, but what if
we find that there are no real demons
lurking at these depths after all,
no stinging trail of malignancy?
Then we might uncover the brightness
of ourselves and discover
the expanse of other creatures
who light up this permanence of night
with their strange beauty.
Image from wikimedia commons: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Colossal_octopus_by_Pierre_Denys_de_Montfort.jpg
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I enjoyed this- Starting out
I enjoyed this- Starting out searching for monsters but discovering instead the beauty in the unknown and the strangely different. At least, that's where this poem took me and I loved it- I always smile when given optimistic endings.
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Love this- plankton..bio
Love this- plankton..bio luminosity, was watching Wales doc on iplayer and its so beautiful i wrote poems! The deep is not all death and ugly is it..i was looking for an equivalent underwater metaphor for sharing wotsits/popcorn with a cute minataur...great poem :)
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I liked the message in your
I liked the message in your poem very much. It is a deep meaning :0) More deep than any description of sea monsters could be! Has made me happy
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