"Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

Cherry

By Penny4athought

Sun, 26 Jun 2022
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8 comments
 

deleted content - to publish book​

Certificate 12
Story
"Willow's Tail"
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I so enjoyed reading about all the intrigue, magic, and Willow's, Martha's and Perfidia's powers. Life is so full of misunderstandings, you never know what might happen next. 

Great story telling Penny and thanks for sharing.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Jenny. You always leave me such encouraging comments, and I always appreciate them.smiley

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Submitted by marandina on

Yes, congratulations on completing a novel-length story. Beautifully crafted throughout. Whimsy and drama. You could definitely edit and publish this if you chose to. Paul 

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Paul for reading along and for all your kind and helpful comments through each chapter of this story. I’ve gone back and tried to clean up a few typos I’d noticed, but I’m sure I've missed quite a few more. I might consider trying to publish this one; if I can find the time to give it a proper grammatical once over.smiley

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Submitted by Di_Hard on

This dialogue is sparkling,  not a single un needed word, it's really fun to read. Thankyou so much for keeping going, it has been wonderful to see your story unfold, the strong characters and place. That the relationship wrong-turns of the two central human characters are resolved by Willow's "moral compass" is brilliant. And I liked very much how you finish on a fur ball! Though I will miss the lovely surprise of finding a new episode - I do hope you may write some more Perfidia one day!

I agree with Paul, if I were a publisher I would want this, all of us who have found such pleasure in Willow's Tail can't be the only ones

That photo has such a funny expression :0) Your cat will wonder why you have stopped creeping up to take pictures

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

I cannot thank you enough Di-Hard for all the welcoming, helpful, encouraging, uplifting comments and note worthy critiques you've written on each chapter of this little tale. I’m pleased the ending did satisfy and I admit it was difficult to let this story end. I truly had fun with these characters personalities…so maybe...a future revisit to this little group isn’t out of the question; if I can find a plausible plot to build on. smiley

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Submitted by Di_Hard on

If all you need to try a publisher is someone to check for typos, I'd be happy to have a go? I'd be bound to miss a few, but if it would help? I don't like to go on about them every time I see them incase it's discouraging

 

If you do (pleeeaase) do a sequel, I hope it will include Incognito Inc (did I ever say what a fabulous name that is?) Maybe Perfidia could get a job there?

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Good luck with publishing Penny. Don't forget to send me a blurb, pic and link to buy so we can put it on our front page once it's ready!