Ripples of Stream
By Richard L. Provencher
Sun, 02 Oct 2022
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is more than diamond
glitter which creates
a glint of romance
(as between two lovers
who feel a connection)
the kind of gleam
that attracts romance
and beneath
a brocade of gurgles
golden streaks
from sun above-
nightfall mutes
the glitz & sounds
but not the soothing
that weaves
throughout the land.
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I hadn't heard of your bad
I hadn't heard of your bad storm, Richard. Glad you are over it and coped.
I liked the brief refernece to the lovely sound of the ripples at the end, when night hides the glints. Rhiannon
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