Always the hands.....

Cherry

By Mentalelf

Tue, 06 Feb 2024
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4 comments
 

Check the bolt



Check the bolt

For action

Hands slip and slide

Mud and sweat

Sweat and mud

“Alright mate”

“Aye”

“Alright mate”

“Aye”

“We’ll be alright”

“Aye”

Said a thousand times 

a thousand times

“Alright mate”

“Aye”

Check the bayonet

Check the bolt

Check the mag.

Fucking hands

Shake

And sweat

Fucking hands

Shake

“Alright mate”

Fuck fuck fuck fuck!

“Alright mate”.

Nearly 

Pissed me kecks.

Its ok.

Haha couldn’t 

get to the bog.

We’re stood in

One.

Joke.

Check the bayonet

Fucking hands fucking hands

“Alright mate”

“Alright mate”

Fuck em it’ll be alright

“Did you see the first company”?

“No”

We’ll be alright

I love these men.

Can’t say it.

“Alright mate”

“Aye”



Whistle blows. 







 

Certificate 15
Non-fiction
Autobiographical
Biography

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Hi Mentalelf - you've given this in the right age rating, but unfortunately, because the title appears on the general page it has to be U rated . Could you please adjust? You could asterisk a few letters or edit - you just can't keep it as it is - sorry!

 

Submitted by Mentalelf on

Humble apologies, didn't think I'll put it right now.

Kia Kaha (Maori .... "stay strong")

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Thank you!

 

Submitted by TJW on

Lost my zero a few times.  No shame.