would greatly appreciate feedback!

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would greatly appreciate feedback!

i posted my story on this site hoping that i would be maligned more than a little, belittled a lot, and praised only minimally.. basically, i wanted some constructive criticism! * i welcome all comments..

*concerning short story shift of Perspective, and if necessary..your comments on the decadence of moral and physical society..

David Taub (aka...
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Well I tried entering "thomas_israel_alan" into the search author and came up with nothing. What did you write, under what name and where??
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David, thanks for the interest. my story is called "shift of Perspective," and it should be under my name as printed... quote Of The day "I imitate everyone except myself"
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David, thanks for the interest. my story is called "shift of Perspective," and it should be under my name as printed... *quote Of The day* "I imitate everyone except myself" Pablo Picasso
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