Jack's Светлана Феофанова

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Wed, 2007-04-04 01:15

I like it - a sharp zing to the write - and i only didn't like the word 'bum' - 'peach' came to mind, and i apologise for that :D will think more - i'm off to read it again - a goood read xxldx

Wed, 2007-04-04 01:18

littleditty

http://www.abctales.com/story/jack-cade/day-3

Wed, 2007-04-04 12:10

Jack Cade

Ack. Did I write 'bum'? I put this together after coming in from the pub last night, having won a copy of Transformers: The Movie and He-Man and She-Ra Christmas Special in the bonus round of a pub quiz, which involved designing a coat of arms. I say 'put together' because I'd already magpied the best lines from a previous short story. The 'bum' line must've been a new one, however. Thanks, littleditty!

Thu, 2007-04-05 11:28

tcook

And you won the big set of books on Booktribes - it must be winning time for the jack cade household.

Thu, 2007-04-05 11:37

ivoryfishbone

cor ... well done jack cade ...

Thu, 2007-04-05 12:10

brighteyes

Is it not spelt "scimitar?" "your Italy of loose hair," is ace by the way. Tres kinetic poem.

"I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

Thu, 2007-04-05 23:59

Jack Cade

"And you won the big set of books on Booktribes - it must be winning time for the jack cade household." Hey, wow! Really? Cool!

Wed, 2007-04-11 00:53

Jack Cade

Russian pole-vaulter.

Wed, 2007-04-11 15:33

littleditty

Yeah -keep bum...why do we have such few good words for bum?

Wed, 2007-04-11 15:43

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tcook

Arse Bottom Bahoochie Derriere Behind More? I'm sure there are....

Wed, 2007-04-11 21:23

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littleditty

Bahoochie? ahhhhhhh haaaaa haaaaa ROLF! - any more?

Wed, 2007-04-11 21:37

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rokkitnite

Um, I'm not convinced by the TMNT reference - I assume you were likening her pole to Donatello's bo staff, oui? Anyway, that felt out of register, and not in a good way. Otherwise, sexcellent poem.

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