The Show

I think it’s important that his body is there,
by the water. It fits in with the blood
and the ghosts. What they want to do
is roll the body down the hill, which is typical,
and they want to cut the florist.
I’m happy to fish him out of the water
but what is going to happen when a woman
turns up with a bouquet?
We could cut Rachel’s flat.
What about Jack walking down by the river,
picking some daffs,
finding the body
and ending up in the central reservation
or somewhere equivalent
with his whole life in tatters?
I think it’s important to keep the mother in.
She adds something.
We should keep her.
And Rachel’s schedule isn’t locked
yet. If you had a choice,
who would you choose?
It’s no contest. Ghosts and blood
and some terrible dialogue.
We need a nasty accident.