Poet's Progress
By jennifer
Thu, 10 Jul 2008
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Poet’s Progress (10th July 2008, 1.28pm)
The page is full, the lines completed,
black where there should be white,
words jostling each other for space,
unable to breathe free and move;
the meaning flows in parallel lines,
leaving no room for ambiguity;
too many explanations, so much
spelled out in uniform rigidity;
I am lost, my mind meandering
from the path I have trodden hard;
out into the open fields where no
boundaries restrict or challenge me;
freedom, I fear, will flood to my head;
I must hold tight to my reins, not let
the prose run away with me, make me
wordy and self-indulgent; stay concise;
I must apply the same rules, abide
by the same code; words tight, honed.
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