The Woman in White
By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 26 Oct 2008
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They paid their last respects – laid tulips
on the freshly-dug grave of the vicar’s late wife.
He’d seemed to take it in his stride. Said God moved
in mysterious ways – asked one and all to say a prayer.
Just two months wed, she was struck down in her prime –
a thrombosis, they said. It was at Evensong they found him,
slumped across a pew. A photo of his new bride on the seat
beside him. In his cold hands’ lectern, a bible and tucked between
its pages, a slip of paper that read. ‘Lord, forgive me. Disrespect
unintended, but I don’t understand. It seems I’ve lost the plot …
Somewhere between, ‘Our Father who art in heaven’ and Amen.
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'In his cold hands’
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'In his cold hands’ lectern' - this was a beautiful metaphor Tina and my favourite lines have to be the ending; ‘Lord, forgive me. Disrespect
unintended, but I don’t understand. It seems I’ve lost the plot …
Somewhere between, ‘Our Father who art in heaven’ and Amen.'
I truly moving piece :)
Magic xxx
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This is a smashing poem Tina
This is a smashing poem Tina and I agree with Magic about those last few lines truely inspired weren't they. Love Val x
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Long time since I've been on
Long time since I've been on here. Even longer since I read one of your pieces. Eveyone else seems to have said it all. Loved it.
Lfuller
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