Life, Not So Freely Chosen
By Bradene
Tue, 11 Nov 2008
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She, fluttering in vulgar decadence
round the soft amber sodium street light
at once pounces upon a likely chance.
Earning enough to score later that night
perhaps a little angel dust or coke,
lessening the drudge of life's dreary fight.
Pleasuring a stranger, some pervy bloke,
to buy a piece of sweet oblivion
on which she prays to hell she may well choke.
Long ago she had crossed the Rubicon,
so for her, sadly there is no way back;
the stench of the road she'd chosen clung on.
No shining future ... should she just attack
the gift of life she was given, unasked ?
Screw it, hump it, thump it, turn it dark black?
Will death swoop down upon her soon, unmasked?
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Now this I really like, Val.
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Now this I really like, Val. My favourite stanza:-
"Long ago she had crossed the Rubicon,
so for her, Sadly there is no way back;
the stench of the road she'd chosen clung on."
Well done:-)
Tina xx
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I particularly liked the
I particularly liked the power in this line:
'to buy a piece of sweet oblivion
on which she prays to hell she may well choke.'
Superb imagery.
But why is 'Sadly' capitalised?
J x
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Sorry, being a pitnicking
Sorry, being a pitnicking teacher, again!
I'll shut up now!
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Hilarious. Henceforth, I
Hilarious.
Henceforth, I shall be known as 'Nitpicker Pickup' rather than 'Jennifer Pickup'!
Although I still prefer Witch Bitch - see:
http://www.abctales.com/story/jennifer/witch-bitch
one of my little rants!
J x
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