Hi, What's Your Name? (Inspiration Point)

By MySpiffyNewShoes

Tue, 31 Mar 2009
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Hi, what's your name?

I feel like I've met you...

Hi, what's your name?

I swear I know you...

Hi what's your name?

You seem friendly

Hi, what's your name?

you say we've met before?

Several times before?

Well, in that case, what IS your name, I must know?

Robert?

And you're my son?

my 50 year old son?

oh................

Hi, what's your name?

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Submitted by Dynamaso on
Says so much without saying much at all. Sad and wonderful.

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on
As D says, sad, a lifetime lost, in 30 words, atb L

 

Submitted by jennifer on
I witnessed this, between my Grandmother and my father. It was horrendous. Well captured J x