The city is different now
By mcmanaman
Sat, 03 Oct 2009
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Cars drift like yellow plastic ducks
on bubblebath
like clouds on a summer day
watching the test match
car alarms play Brahms
traffic lights become glitterballs
red, amber, green helix
across twilight
and walking home has never felt so easy
legs are like newlyweds
asleep in bed
breathing in synchronicity
inner cities become Lincolnshire villages
I am sat cross legged on top of the highest building in town
my finger on my lips.
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I admit to tripping on some
Permalink Submitted by Frances Macaula... on
I admit to tripping on some line lengths: perhaps shortening them, breaking in different places...
but the poem certainly deserves a cherry.
I like it!
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