Wall-E
By aitticboy
Mon, 25 Jan 2010
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A simple screen,
Projected on a wall
The amusmant of
An animated Cartoon
The striking image
The darkening colours
Four friends watch
In awe of the picture
Death.
it strikes the heart
tearing her down
no-one noticed
[poor gal]
I comfort her
there was still,
though we would deny it
A certain spark between us.
She weeps
Times are hard for her
A lost love
A lost friend
We hope, we pray
Look for the good things
A pillow factory
The smiles of children
And we'll manage
T pull through it all
God will hold us close-
we are his children - after all
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I cried. And I agree. I like
I cried.
And I agree.
I like the last few lines especially, the punctuation and the rhythm really work.
ankari x
ankari x
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I don't understand it
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I don't understand it
V. Valentine ©
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