My First Poem
By 04greevesj
Fri, 29 Jan 2010
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What do you feel,
You put pen to paper and the rest just flows,
Findin the inspiration,
What next... Who knows,
A masterpiece or maybe just fun,
Its like pressing all your feelings onto a piece of paper,
Just write what you feel inside,
Its definitely safer,
You dont have to be clever,
Just never say never,
With the world as your inspiration you can never fail,
Thats how I wrote,
My first poem.
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Dude great piece, only one
Permalink Submitted by andrew-evans on
Dude great piece, only one thing, you don't have to put a common after every line. But seriously a good poem
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Nice write, a few typos to
Nice write, a few typos to sort out (so easy to miss when it's your own, I know, trust me!)I like it,:~}
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"inspiration" x 2
"inspiration" x 2 "definitely" dont = don't,
thats = that's, make the i's capitals, getting the spelling, grammer and punctuation right is a good start.
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