There and then

By Firebird

Wed, 03 Mar 2010
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6 comments
 

I saw you that day
I knew it was you...
There.
I held your hand
and felt your heart.
Instantly,
I asked "Where
are you going?"; you said
"Tibet"
and touched my soul...
Quietly I lent forward
Into you ... I fell
Completely.
Eyes locked in inner peace,
Exchanging hearts
in each other's hand.
There...
My lips rested on your cheek,
gently inhaling a dream,
eyes closed; Heavenly soft
infusions of wamth within.
A new world opened
We smiled...
Entered in.
There.
We stared...
into each other.
Knowingly...
We shared a moment,
a brief eternity...
There.
And then
I watched you leave
as our life began..

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Comments

Submitted by kheldar on
Lovely piece firebird, you paint a picture of tranquility but at the same time strong emotions lie just below the surface. David :--)

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Submitted by shoe on
This is just lovely, love these lines, "My lips rested on your cheek, gently inhaling a dream," captures a heartbreaking moment, beautifully.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I agree so much with shoe and kheldar, Firebird. A gentle but strong poem that touched my heart. Tina

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you all so much x:) So pleased you liked it. Your kind comments mean so much to me x:)

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'Quietly I lent forward Into you ... I fell Completely. Eyes locked in inner peace, Exchanging hearts in each other's hand.' - love these lines, Firebird. Beautiful and tender, a brilliant piece ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you so much , Magic x:)