My Vampire
By skinner_jennifer
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I saw him stood by the chair, he cast his presence with a stare. He drew me in and suddenly I was next to him. His eyes pierced me like a knife, he said he wanted me for his wife. He touched my hand Icould not stand, Suddenly the room was spinning, I hit the floor his presence winning. Again he fixed me with that stare, I could not move I would not dare. I don't know what happened next except I hurt my head, I woke up with a bitten neck alone upon my bed. I tried to move my heart was beating fast, I felt so cold I could feel his skin then I gasped. He had taken my very soul, I knew that was his goal. I waited he came to me the following night, I really felt elated. This time I went with him, I knew I had to go, he took me to a cave we went way below. I don't know how we got there, he just simply took my hand, then we simply floated away across the land. His power he was casting, he said our love was everlasting. But he said I would need to feed upon the blood of others, I even fed on my mother, father, sisters and brothers. My lover told me of his past life, he took me places and showed me the tomb of his past wife. He told me he was once a peasant farmer, who one day was accosted by a female charmer, who was greatly fascinating her looks and charms were devastating. She seemed to lay a spell on him, then suddenly obtained him. She said, "You will be mine forever, and that I will endeavour to give you powers beyond your wildest dreams you never ever would believe." And so he gave to me what he had aquired, I took these powers and felt very inspired. I was a special vampire and of that I will never tire.
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i wrote a short about a
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This is very cleverly
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This is very cleverly
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immortality would scare the
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Hey Jenny
Hey Jenny, it's hard to find one of your I haven't read, even though there are hundreds. I just haphazardly poke around and had some trouble finding one I hadn't read today. There is nothing at all wrong with this, just very different from your new stuff. I think you found your voice somewhere along the way. Have you ever gone back and compared your old poems with your new?
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