Fresh and Clunky
By Louise178
Wed, 08 Sep 2010
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6 comments
Eyes convey the start of love
sparkling blue full of sky
up the rainbow
down the other side
Birmingham, Scotland,
the west, Mexico
where ever you are
I too will go
past the sun
beyond the moon
Such an easy track
as a river flows
this train will peruse
through dark tunnels
and windy stations
I'll shovel the coal
you can toot the horn
we are steaming now
just like Casey Jones..
up the rainbow
down the other side
but we must hurry
quick more coal
we only have
the rest of our lives.
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I love that you go from
I love that you go from Birmingham to Scotland and then.... to MEXICO!! This crazy poem made me smile. thanks.
just a poem monger
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"we only have the rest of
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
"we only have
the rest of our lives."
Love that! This poem seems so genuine.
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Aaw wow, this is lovely warm
Aaw wow, this is lovely warm heart poem! K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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