Live long and love

By Kahdai

Thu, 26 May 2011
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Now would understanding help?,
no they had had a whole life!,
they knew it would end, early,
never need to be hubby or wife
as long as they both knew love
never grew old, yet life-long,
it was not rushed, only lived.

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Submitted by maisie on
might sound better if you reversed the wife and hubby. otherwise i like it.

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, very true words spoken here. I also like the last three lines:- as long as they both knew love never grew old, yet life-long, it was not rushed, only lived. Those lines ring so true. Thankyou for the read Kahdai. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
thankyou maisie I was just trying to make it rhyme Thanks Jenny some people know they wont live old K

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