Why couldn't it be forever?

By beaste

Mon, 31 Oct 2011
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Time flies when I'm with you
Every minute is like a second
Every moment is like heaven,
believe me its so true

Why can't the clock...
Just for an hour
Just for a minute
Even for a second
Just to be with you a bit longer
...stop it's constant tic toc?

But as the end draws to the hour
The tic toc only gets louder

Why does this moment have to stop?
Why does this have to be?
Why does every hour have to come to an end?
Why can't I just be with you?
Why can't you just be with me?

It was so nice, so beautiful
Why couldn't it be forever?

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Comments

Submitted by hilary west on
Nice idea of the clock ticking and a desire for this love to be forever. Nothing is forever.

 

Submitted by beaste on
thank you hilary and thanks for commenting on my other poem as well. shame some things can't be forever though

Bea :-)

Submitted by Wolverain on
People have different perspective of forever. i Believe love does last forever.

Submitted by beaste on
awww, i hadnt thought of it like that Rhi

Bea :-)