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Cherry

By agnelli

Sun, 27 Nov 2011
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12 comments
 

They say no man is an island
But
Browsing bruised among the status updates
Tags and wallposts, well-located namechecks
Furling forward like a procurator’s scroll
And canting solemn litanies of shindigs no one texted me about -

I am Rockall on a windy night
Cruel-peaked, storm petrel’d and covered in puffin shite.

Certificate 15
New poems
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
love the ending!

 

Submitted by agnelli on
Thanks, insert!

Submitted by ScoZen on
I liked the sparseness of this litle tale. Suits the image of Rockall I think.
ScoZen

Submitted by MaliciousMudkip on
That was fantastic, short and sweet! Ending gave me a laugh, good job.

 

Submitted by agnelli on
Glad you like the ending, MaliciousMudkip, it was nearly "Guillemot guano". I may yet change my mind..

Submitted by fatboy74 on
I love Jon Bon Jovi and it's nice of you to quote him at the start of your poem (which is a little belter by the way) :-)

 

Submitted by scratch on
Nothing wrong with that.

 

Submitted by scratch on
Do not change your mind.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi all :)Agnelli :) Love the ending 2 and made me laugh, a very clever way 2 create your point!!! Well Done :) And fatboy74, I 2 like to listen and watch mmm Jon Bon Jovi he he he :) I agree about the ending, its perfect so it would be a shame if you changed it. Keep Writing Keep Smiling :)))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Prettyrose Sometimes I don't get things, like a story, or poem contents. So maybe don't answer. Incase wrong! I see and feel it so different, to many. take care,keep smiling,thnk for tip! works out,people kind stare! Poor old girl! cavalcaderl julie xx

Submitted by Christine on
Best facebook reading yet. Well done.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
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