All Hallows Eve
By ChroniclesofTania
Thu, 28 Jun 2012
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The Chief Inspector scratched his head in puzzlement.
First it was the mysterious corn circles, now the bodies of the local youths were spread throughout the field. The deaths were like nothing he had seen before.
The way the bodies were laid on the ground made it look like they were running away from something and then frightened to death, going by their expressions.
There were no inhabitants for miles.
“If only you could talk?” He said to the scarecrow.
The scarecrow’s evil grin widened behind the Chief Inspector’s retreating back.
© Tania Dias
http://chroniclesoftania.wordpress.com/flash-fiction/
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what happens next?
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what happens next?
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I like the ending!
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I like the ending!
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Hi Chronicles, welcome first
Hi Chronicles, welcome first off. I like this piece in particular the ending. One tiny observation if I may? I suggest looking again at the end of the first line - question the necessity of "in puzzlement" if the Inspector scratches his head you have already told us that he is puzzled the omission would force us to make our own picture and increase our involvement in your story.
Please remember that this is only my own subjective opinion on your already good work.
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Yes, welcome. I enjoyed
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Yes, welcome. I enjoyed this. Hope to see more.
Rich
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