animal fury
By braintrain
Tue, 28 Aug 2012
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My love puts nitro to your words
hastening them on the wings of hummingbirds
across the valley of just dessert
unto the land of plentiful hurt
you lied to me I have herd
if I can believe a Zebra's word
brung to me down the river absurd
a monkey's tale would have been preferred
you toad me that you were the good guys
but that idea croaked along with your spies
sent on metal eagles to probe my skies
its man I now have grown to despise
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Really liked this
Really liked this braintrain. Clever use of words and original theme. The first two lines shouldn't work, but they do, wonderful stuff.
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