A Delicate Turnover
By Richard L. Provencher
Tue, 11 Sep 2012
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Look outside the skin of sight
and slow a plan in progress -
lay hold of words that cause
delight and turn them into:
‘Such a sweet child’ for
"When he enters a room the air
is full of bells and their
tinkling brings a breath of living."
‘The tree without bark shone
in the sun’ could easily
change to "An aged silhouette
etched against a cliff honed
by the elements into an
eagle's perch, like iron and
a throne for a mighty king."
Words are made up of
more words and the way we
re-create them make
writing more interesting.
© Richard L. Provencher
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