Winter
By jfiedler
Tue, 11 Dec 2012
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the frozen stream
reflects the snow brightness
lighting up the forest
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So much said, with very few
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
So much said, with very few words.
Beautiful.
Jenny.
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I like this simplicity very
I like this simplicity very much. Almost technically a haiku (5/7/5 syllables per line) but a wonderfully expressed natural observation nonetheless. Lovely.
Having said that I would rather have a lyrical expression of this quality rather that something that's sticks rigidly to the technical aspect at the expense of literary excellence.
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