Bridge
By maudsy
Sun, 03 Mar 2013
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A cacophony of slate
Uneven and sharp, yet
Permanent; bending, un-mathematically,
Across the non-judgemental beck,
Shaded by willow limbs;
Embraced in geniality
Not consolation
Antiquated yet swan-like,
Never lonely, evoking a love unpremeditated
In its sculpture, its beauty encapsulated in universal
Pencil and lens, perhaps not the significance, it
Sleeps, nestled upstream, benevolently cradled
In a vale between these munificent hills
Today no footfall or hoof
Burdens the dark stone, the traffic
Reliant now on smoother brick down river,
Spanning the widest point, more
Streamlined than its predecessor;
Safer, un-photographed
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There's definitely a charm
There's definitely a charm in the old bridges. Nice poem Maudsy.
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Yet the title is "Bridge".
Yet the title is "Bridge". A ford then, perhaps?
Or is the metaphor multilayered and more esoteric? Forgotten/remembered, ancient/modern, ordered/random, valued/scorned, forgotten/extant all acting as a foil for a relational element?
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It took Scratch's comment
It took Scratch's comment for me to read this in its proper light, and I'm sorry to have been so obtuse. It gets better with every read- I am in awe
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Nice one. Whoever picked
Nice one. Whoever picked this I'm glad you did. Ultimately I think that the language is the key to quality poetry. The poetic language should inform the enjoyment and provide for the beauty of the read. There is poetry on display here and that is really all that matters.
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I don't even begin to
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I don't even begin to understand this, maudsy, but it's a hauntingly beautiful poem.
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