sunny acrosstic poem.
By molly10
Fri, 19 Apr 2013
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Sometimes it is to hot.
Up there is a nice sunny sky.
Next time make it colourful.
Name it better and wonderful.
Yet it will eventually rain.
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Molly, this is a fantastic
Molly, this is a fantastic first post, and welcome to the site. For all the adults in here who don't know, I bet you can tell us what an acrosstic poem is?
Just one little niggle, in the context that you've used it sweetheart, the to should be too.
Well done on your first piece.
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