Droog
By Chinobus
Sat, 27 Apr 2013
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You belittle those you consider incorrect
drolling about useless mistakes
or ranting from expired lungs
about the miniscule issues we share in circled irony
a shriviling critic more base than moldy bread
who happens to chance upon unsuspecting stupidity
so it happens to be limitless in that timid jandiced mind
perhaps a taste of your own vomitted medicine will suffice your ignorance
maybe I can skewer you with the long greyish stake of the pen
however every writer needs a bug eyed critic
to provide a small drought of deceitful lustrous liquid
praying to whatever god that this arduous task of words
ends with a final dawning note of near immortality.
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Very good Chinobus. I would
Very good Chinobus. I would look again at the fourth last line. I think that it is too literal when seen in light of the rest. A good effort though.
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