Here is a House( this was call there is a house)
By swindonwoody
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Here is a house
that is
very old
its windows big and bold
its paintwork failed as the year went by
its use to be
blue and bright
shining bright
in sunlight
and when people
walk by on a rainy
day
it brightens
up their day
but time caught up with it
All the lives that have
live within its wall
when it
brand new
a young couple in love
he carries his love across its door
who brought up their family within it walls
in time
kids running in and out of its doors
time went on and
years move on
in it
garden people would sit in the sun
children playing on swings
as people chatting away
and on a summer day
and in the wintertime
when it was so cold outside
its walls and fire kept its
owner warm and safe inside
and at Christmas time
a lovely Christmas tree in its window
would be bold and bright
with all its light
and a snowman
just sitting outside
open its front door
you can feel
it warmth love and laughter
its hangs in the air
you feel there
if you close your eyes
you can imagine
children running around
running upstairs and jumping on beds
the sliding down its stairs
In its walls, babies have been born
cry have been heard
shock and screaming
and disbelieving
it has been empty for so long
it's now waiting
to see what next
the sound
a key turn in the door
a young couple walks in the hall
and smile
they say this is there forever home
and time start again
here is a house
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The loveliest poart of your
The loveliest poart of your verse is in your descriptive visualizations. However, the flow is uneven in spots due to easily solved wordiness. There is also a spelling mistake. You need to edit so other readers can more fully enjoy.
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