Sphinx

By paborama

Tue, 20 Jan 2015

1 comments

Shuttered smile beams on desert

Sand-dewed eyes, listen

Beware the Sphinx

Caution traveller

Ask the question, prepare to die

Hope bereft yet

Here you come

Caution traveller

Came the wise and came the fool

Joined in this journey

Here you came

Your advice, sir?

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Tue, 2015-01-20 23:09

Is English your first language?

Some interesting points you've raised within this poem. Then ending feels as if it's in the wrong place.

Just a thought or two.

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!