scrape off the name
By JupiterMoon
Sat, 04 Apr 2015
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scrape off the name
i was buried
too soon;
i shouted hope
and dreams,
and no one heard.
even as the lid
was nailed down,
tipped earth,
chuckling back
toward the hole,
i shouted ‘too soon’!
now, the proud
stone catches
the midday sun,
flecked granite,
tugging mourners back again.
scrape off the name
chiselled letter by letter,
it was too soon –
my life had just got better!
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Nice dramatic building and I
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
Nice dramatic building and I enjoyed it right up until the end. I enjoyed the last line less. Am I missing something?
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