Where people only go to work and from which they come away again at night
By lavadis
Sat, 25 Jun 2016
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He threw his newspaper
and seasick green rucksack
on to the station concourse,
grabbed the knot of my tie
and slapped me across the face
with an open palm
Cromarty sea state slight or moderate, occasionally rough at first in the north
My right eyebrow unzipped
emptying itself
like an upturned ink pot
into my eye
before his fist
smashed my cheekbone
into the shape of a
tessellating children's puzzle
North Utsire cyclonic 4 or 5
decreasing 3 at times
moderate or good
visibility very poor
My legs collapsed
and the glass ladder of reality
shattered
as I clawed for rungs
that were no more than
vicious stubs
and slid
and slipped
Trafalgar wind Northerly 5 or 6
occasionally 7 later
becoming variable
4 at times in far southeast
'Fucking die, fucking die'
sang his slavering skull mask
as his right heel claw-hammered
metronomically
conducting the symphony
of disfigurement
until everything inside me
was as contorted
as the geology of my first lie
Forties southwesterly force 8 to storm 10,
occasionally violent storm 11, perhaps hurricane force 12 later in northwest
Sea State high becoming very high, occasionally phenomenal later in north
Sea State high becoming very high, occasionally phenomenal later in north
The noise began shortly after the storm ended
incredibly loud,
shrieking,
accompanied by a roar
which became
so much a part of me
you would think
it was impossible
for it ever
to be disentangled
it was a grand and quiet sound
a distant door
which slams
like a roll of thunder
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The violence is sickening,
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
The violence is sickening, but I guess that's the point. You take us to the eye of the storm, the ebbing away a relief.
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