An Oft Repeated Mall ?
By forest_for_ever
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An Oft Repeated Mall
Surging, urgent, a frantic microcosm sweeps along the Mall.
A human tsunami of credit-swollen want;
Devouring, this unnecessary greed
Indiscriminately numbs the simple soul.
Crowded, pinball-driven this relentless tide
Swallows any timid soul in it’s path
Like crowded lab rats scurrying for scaps.
Slaves, bonded to spending
In a desperate search for satisfaction.
Is this an oft repeated mall?
A pointless, painful repetition
Of a meaningless retail craving
A hunger never sated,
An eternal empty world.
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Very well and sympathetically
Very well and sympathetically described. I liked Indiscriminately numbs the simple soul. and meaningless retail craving. And of course what really satisfies is free! Rhiannon
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This describes a sad dynamic,
This describes a sad dynamic, but to put it in such a way, it brings understanding.
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good one I will do you
good one I will do you shopping for you loves shopping
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