rainbow feeling

By pipkinini

Fri, 12 Jan 2018
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you are everything.

my eyes bleed

in colors for you,

left with black and purple

 

my heart beats

in gray tones

red left to dry

thumping alone

 

my lungs gasp

searching for

your silver breath

to fill them more

 

my fingers curl

pulling tight

memories from

a blue-lit night

 

chest aches

stomach sour

hot pink tightness

rotten green taste

 

a rainbow feeling,

together a searing white prism

burnt black with a touch

a shadow imprinted in thoughts,

draining away, a ringing echo

Certificate 15
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Comments

Submitted by Parson Thru on

It's great to see emotions interpreted as colours. All the senses and feelings are connected.

Parson Thru

Submitted by maisie on

love the milimism, the cutting down to a tiny line...  I'm not sure about the broader lines at the end.

/the colour stuff is well done, and I felt a bit sick after a bit.  its my empathic side coming out¬

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!