All that's left is me

By Jamie Sykes

Fri, 07 Sep 2018

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4 comments

I see myself once a week
When the pints are empty
My armour is stripped
I can't remember the books
I was supposed to have read
And all that's left
Is me

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Comments

You do have a gift for this.

Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on Fri, 2018-09-07 04:23

You do have a gift for this. Sublte, succinct poems with a surprising depth. Nice work.

Thanks so much for your

Permalink Submitted by Jamie Sykes on Fri, 2018-09-07 17:03

Thanks so much for your feedback. I'm just trying to write as much as I can and practise. Let me know anything you think I can improve on.

I like your poem. Really

Permalink Submitted by thornwood on Fri, 2018-09-07 06:50

I like your poem. Really short but very humanly and deep and meaningfull.

Keep writing.

Stephen d

Thanks so much. I am trying

Permalink Submitted by Jamie Sykes on Fri, 2018-09-07 17:04

Thanks so much. I am trying to practise and post as much as I can.

Let me know what you think I can improve on.