What If
By Richard L. Provencher
Mon, 10 Jun 2019
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stars were inanimate objects
more like painted – rocks
in luminous
moon-white
and I
a shadow
lurking as a tree
stillness my password?
Hunger is attractive.
From my hideaway
I snatch a pudgy bat—
its shriek
resonates: gives me hope.
The breeze is a sounding
board – that thrills
to the accent
of my victory
as an echo
that criss-crosses
a valley full of loneliness
and I sift between each
tree – soundless.
Movement just
a flicker.
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It sounds lovely,
It sounds lovely, "as an echo" in "a valley full of loneliness" the images are beautiful too. It is interresting how you are experimenting in your poetry lately I like you work a lot.
See you Richard! Tom
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