Pluto’s ode to Charon
By onemorething
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My vanilla heart churns coldness,
bleeds its nitrogen in dark lines
that slash deep into my own white plains,
its pulse sets the reverse haze
of my atmosphere, here the pellucid dazzle
of my azure sky, that seems to promise
oceans and suns, beguiles
with the shine of the first lie.
You, my silent moon, twist,
trapped with me in our tidal turns,
and I tell you again, apologetic,
that I don't know why
I must do everything backwards.
That I would unshackle you,
if I could, from this belt of ice,
to the liberty of any other galaxy,
where their nights are so lampful
that a sky might shimmer daybright,
but I have been shamed,
and unnamed, as I am -
it is impossible -
when in this hinterland of winters,
you are my only light to see my way by.
Image of Pluto with its white heart from pixabay. Have been meaning to write about Pluto and its reverse atmosphere for a while and wanted to use the word 'lampful' in a poem.
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I know now that Charon is one
I know now that Charon is one of Pluto's moons. And I looked up 'reverse atmosphere' as I didn't have a clue. It's only believed to exist on Pluto (no one's ever been there, but we could send Trump and Boris as they like to be experts on everything?) and the planet moves in the opposite direction to the atmosphere on it. I mean, I do that too but....
https://www.google.co.uk/amp/s/www.newscientist.com/article/2232638-plut...
So there you go. I'm wiser for having read this.
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The beauty of
a classical education, recognising the names of planets' obscure moons. That suggests Boris would be quite at home, Trump perhaps would not. Although I admit both deserve to be under the Lord of the Underworld's aegis.
Anyway. I love this kind of thing. Well done.
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Your understanding of the
Your understanding of the concept in this poem is excellent.
Jenny.
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