dance

By AleesiaSteel

Tue, 09 May 2023
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I wanna dance..

     For once

 

Just once.. 

     Let myself feel the dance

 

For once,

     I want to be myself..

 

Or maybe more than once,

     Feel the music through the dance

 

Maybe more then once,

     To the beat, to the rhythm ..

 

Feel it more then just once 

     Going through my blood and my veins 

 

As if I am about to die.

      Just dance …

 

 

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Young Writers

Comments

Submitted by Steve Button on

Very good - this sounds personal, and you get the sense of wanting freedom to come across nicely here. I also like the way some of the lines don't quite finish...