Rain
By Richard L. Provencher
Sat, 12 Aug 2023
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Rain
left town a short
while ago
&
sunshine bright took
its place.
Come & walk with
me – see the drying of
leaves and green
sustenance for deer
& other creatures.
Rain is good.
Sun is bright
in God’s Garland
of life-
All is OK & right.
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a blessing
A beautiful poem Richard and also the form/shape – looks to me like rain like little streams of water. I've also written some poems on rain and thunderstorms and lightning it is fascinating. When I get out of here I want to make a hobby photographing lightning and waterfalls. I've seen photos it is amazing.
“see the drying leaves” at first I read “dying” so that's OK.
All the best && Nolan
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