The Hyenas by chant

I like this - because it's very very clear as to what it's trying to say:

http://www.abctales.com/story/chant/the-hyenas

...and it says it very well.

But is poetry meant to be this transparent?

Faceless Parts One and Two by 27

I like these.

They tell a story well from the first person and that is not easy. They tell it so well that it may even be true - or you think it might, which is more important.

http://www.abctales.com/node/545700

http://www.abctales.com/story/27/2005-faceless-part-two

This is conventional writing at its best.

Your thoughts?

Thanks

I have never flagged one of my own peices before but I'm doing it now, because the opportunity to do it under the name 'Enzo' will never happen again, and I don't think I'll be around for a while.

I just wanted to thank you all, because this peice doesn't really cover how much I've appreciated the kind words and support over the last couple of years.

http://www.abctales.com/story/enzo/titled-self-indulgence-enzo-or-a-cunn...

Seeya!

Ben..

Trippy, man....

http://www.patmedia.net/marklevinson/cool/cool_illusion.html

p.s. best not to close the window after, use Back instead.

I've just found something new on ABC

If you click on the country in someone's profile it lists everyone from that country who is a registered user. It also gives you all the photos that people have uploaded.

That's fun now!

Faking it by anonymouszebra

God, this is briiliant, this is ABSOLUTELY Brilliant....I have run out of adjectives, sorry. I thought the story was briiliant, the swearing appropriate and real, ....did I say this was brilliant?

I'm sorry, I loved it, that's all I can say!

http://www.abctales.com/story/anonymouszebra/faking-it

Thank you for such a great read.

Transmute

Transmute
By narcissa
from the ABC set Chaper 15

Think I'm supposed to say something clever about poems, but when something just hits me, especially the way words are used, I just have to say how much i liked it.
Jumped off and bit me. Well sharp.

Where to go with Weasels

I'm wondering, is this the best place to try out novel chapters? Or is it more suited to short stories and poems?
On that point, my "Bag of Weasels" stuff seems to have started out well, then gone down the pan somewhat. I wonder if anyone who's read any of it would feel free to comment.

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