They tell a story well from the first person and that is not easy. They tell it so well that it may even be true - or you think it might, which is more important.
I have never flagged one of my own peices before but I'm doing it now, because the opportunity to do it under the name 'Enzo' will never happen again, and I don't think I'll be around for a while.
I just wanted to thank you all, because this peice doesn't really cover how much I've appreciated the kind words and support over the last couple of years.
If you click on the country in someone's profile it lists everyone from that country who is a registered user. It also gives you all the photos that people have uploaded.
God, this is briiliant, this is ABSOLUTELY Brilliant....I have run out of adjectives, sorry. I thought the story was briiliant, the swearing appropriate and real, ....did I say this was brilliant?
Think I'm supposed to say something clever about poems, but when something just hits me, especially the way words are used, I just have to say how much i liked it.
Jumped off and bit me. Well sharp.
I'm wondering, is this the best place to try out novel chapters? Or is it more suited to short stories and poems?
On that point, my "Bag of Weasels" stuff seems to have started out well, then gone down the pan somewhat. I wonder if anyone who's read any of it would feel free to comment.