Submitted by Meryll on October 21, 2005 - 10:00.
WILBUR WORM AND THE UMBRELLA
I laughed! A good sign, kids stuff only works, I think, if I enjoy it aswell.
Characters were cool, Wilbur eating his leaf sandwiches, and Alfie sliding about on his six unsteady legs were wonderful images.
The different attempts to find a suitable umbrella could've moved at a faster pace, for me anyway. Just to make it all zip along. But the different attempts were all great imagination, I just wanted to get to the solution much quicker!