Pollution
By a102866
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Starburst days
Ultraviolet blip
careens into
pumpernickel haze
Cozy Commuters
Neon polluters
transit bridges
Plumes of carbon
waft over rivers
Foamy portents of
liquid nitrogen
oxidate shores
Beacons of the sky
flap nautious vapors
share hegemony in
schizoid prism
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Not sure I've got my head
Not sure I've got my head around all you allusions. But you point to the need for thought on the cumulative effects of pollution – often thoughtless little unnecessary pollutions. Sometimes i think there can be much attention to the need for action by big companies, but reluctance to think of little personal changes that could be made with ease?
There have been some very beneficial actions taken in recent years, like cleaning up emmissions where they can, and rivers.
Rhiannon
(btw did you mean 'nauseous' in the thrid line from the end?)
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